Today we talke abou wish and i interviewed one of my friend.He has soem wishes and he told two wishes of them.First one he wants to be a profession gamer,he used play game for 18 hours a day.Another wish is buy a car because he is an unversity student now.So he need to go to some other place when he has free time,and have a car will make his life easier.And if he can only make one come true that will be buy a new car.He told me he is not a child who like play game anymore,he lose that wish a lot.About those wishes from his family only those wishes like all the families wishes:he have a healthy body,he can study well.......About has he ever tink about his dream can come ture and that will be good or bad for him. He silenced for a while and told me that he tought about that and he thought those wishes like be a pofession gamer would be very cool,but he change his mind now.He said maybe that kind of dream isn't very good for him anymre cause he know he need to have a really job can work for a long time.His wishes didnt have any encourage form his family.And he think not all the wishes are postive some people have so really negative wishes that kinds of wishes are harmful to others life.
I think you can pay more attention for your article. According to you article, I know that he like his life very well, because his dream can become true in the future and I hope he can finish his dream as soon as possible.
ReplyDeleteYou made some mistakes. You wrote "Today we talke abou wish". It should be "Today we talked about wishes". I think you should write more next time. I wish you can be a good game player in the future. I think that it is very interesting.
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