
When people read this topic everyone will has different answer.Everyone has different definition to success but the most important thing of is your need to know what is success to you.When you have aim to success then you can try to achieve it.Then the second step of that is never give up.That is important too.Just like some people wanna lose weight,but like that the way to success need people to keep do it and you will never know when it will happened maybe never or next second.This is the most terrible .Maybe when you give up,there is a thin line between you and success.After you can keep walk one the way to success you can touch the success whatever what is the success in you mind.
Hey, I've read your blog. Here are your mistakes. ""Will have. Definitions. About success. Take out "of". You need. Please don't use of in a wrong way. Giving up. Needs. Keep doing it. You should care about some details of your problems. Your ability of expression need to be improved. When the structure of your article is becoming clearer. Your story will be more complete. Your ability of writing will grow.
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with your points. I believe that we have to try our best to achieve the success. But there are several suggestions about your article. First, could you please write more sentences to support your topic. Second, you can list some examples to make your words clearly. But you still did it well.
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